Anti Aging. Poem by Tajudeen Shah

Anti Aging.



Movement,
Yes, Slow and consistent,
Keeps the earth young.
Man too can traverse
Along the same tracks.
Faith and Obedience,
In God and to Him,
Is what makes both
The most enduring;
Here and After.
Tolerance,
Has her touch on us;
The Mass and Earth
To bear the unbearable.

Sunday, September 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 16 October 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said in few lines..... Movement, Yes, Slow and consistent, Keeps the earth young. The same thoughts applied to man is the beautiful tip for anti aging. Yes, one can keep the thoughts in same passion, really one can be young and healthy always...... Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Soulful Heart 29 September 2014

a concise and precise formula for anti aeging....liked it for its to the point simplicity...

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 September 2014

Hello poet Tajudeen An interesting poem, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Rubab Atwal 15 September 2014

a beautiful poem with such a deep meaning which grows more and more every time one reads this poem.

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