Anti Poem by Indira Renganathan

Anti

Rating: 5.0


Undone wishes give umbrage..
Worry and wrath on stage
Can't afflict umbrage beings stronger
To self but gives worry lowly to distress
Can smite but Umbrage beings weaker
To self but with wrath highly to destruction
Worst is lust..evil most is wrath
What loss will one gain
Gaming against wrath
Beware, beware..

Saturday, April 4, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 04 April 2009

Deep thoughts by Indira nice work 10

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Indira Babbellapati 09 April 2009

yes, let's 'beware...beware! '-a clarion call!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 April 2009

superb in simplicity! one of the best modern verses in PH! keep writing! please read and comment mine on page 1 until 5. thank you.

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Kesav Easwaran 10 April 2009

neat poetic presentation...meaningful words well told...10

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Bob Blackwell 14 April 2009

If we all could live uncontrolled by desires, wants, and our emotions, what a world of peace we would have. Lessons to be learned by this poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2017

An Excellent piece of work carrying a delicate warning to our bemused smartness! Loved your nice creation dear madam! I would like to quote, “…What loss will one gain…Gaming against wrath…Beware, beware… “ Thanks a lot for sharing..10

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Saadat Tahir 26 June 2009

dear indira you espouse highjer ideals in an age that bulldoses and buys any thing and everything...power of the green back deep reflective poem if hopes were horses... cheers

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Ravi A 16 April 2009

A philosophical poem. Gaming with wrath, wrath is the only result. More protest is only born out of protest but the world claims that to protest is their legal right. This is the root of our troubles. We have legalised everything what our Rishis and philosophers have ever said against. Only unconditional love can save humanity.

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Fiona Davidson 16 April 2009

excellent deep words here Indira....10+++

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Vanakkam AkkA This poem aptly mirrors the ESSENCE of what Bhagawan Sri Krishna exorts in geetha: ' SHAKNOTI IHAIVA YAH SODUM PRAK SHAREERAM VIMOCHANAATH | KAMAKRODHODBHAVA VEGAM SA YUKTAH SA SUKHI NARAH || [Chapter 5, verse 23] The speed at which the energies/currents, released when overwhelmed by Lust & Anger, when conquered with the power of ENDURANCE, makes the human WISE & HAPPY. my poem 'BLESSED AM I' is awaiting the touch of your DARSHAN :) -thambi.shree

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