Another Soldier Dies Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Another Soldier Dies

Rating: 4.8


As another day dawns
another soldier dies
at the hands of politics
and the simple minds
of the government lies

Treat our soldiers with pride
not lies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmed Khaled 06 January 2012

It is you who can be depended on in doing such matters, simple, clear and comfortable to mind as they are designed to assist at getting the peace of mind, because going to the point in the indirect astonishing style is the job of the professional ones, aiming at placing the readers; the beholders of your paintings in such a remarkable tranquillity to see the entire scene in ease and comfort............ thank you my friend the creator of dead soldiers and living poems.............. your very friend: : : : : : : : : PH.D: -AHMED KHALRD

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Eric Cockrell 06 January 2012

and bring them home! great poem!

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Vipins Puthooran 07 January 2012

and we are all that soldiers who they fighting for freedom from politicians.... really a great poem! ! ! 10+++

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Jacqui Broad 09 January 2012

Yes, every second, somewhere in this world, a soldier dies. For what? There's still no peace. I wish for one day that there'll be no war, for that day, we can say it was truly peaceful. Thanks Dave, for giving credit to those freedom fighters.

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Unwritten Soul 11 January 2012

They die with pride for sure but the politician who use them for gain pride is a lie. For fallen protectors, thanks a lot for being a shield, may God reply all goodness for them, and for all liars that use lies as protector, nothing will shield you from truth, it just about time :) _Unwritten Soul

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Ruby Honeytip 10 December 2012

Right on! ! So much weight carried by so few words: -)

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Guy Lip-more 06 December 2012

Short to the point, my sentiments aslo. Great little write.

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Kevin Patrick 05 March 2012

Unwritten soul is right To be a soldier takes strength and discipline to stand up for your country while taking orders from cowards and fools who will never fight. This is simple but exact to everything that happens and always will, great read

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 12 February 2012

short and simple but reveals a great truth.thank you.bye bye

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Jodie Cooper 17 January 2012

wow this is short but amazing how can so few words be so full of emoiton

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