Another New Dawn Poem by ismael subba

Another New Dawn

Rating: 4.0


Another new dawn

the setting sun
lightens someday! ?

This isn't world
Its puppets stage...
where lies unknown
mysteries..
Its a drama unwritten
which moves on
yesterday's, today's and tomorrow's sun....

Its been centuries
sun set
from happiness and
human life
but never rose sun
once till date.

Is this eclipse?

birds now never sings
their beautiful melody
flowers never bloom,
never flourishes its sweet smell
smells are blink of an eye...
neither do rivers flow
fluently
flows all way blood and bloods...
we prefer night
we love darkness....
Nature still waits
the sweet voice of
morning bell! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Another new dawn

the setting sun
lightens someday! ?
This isn't world
Its puppets stage...
where lies unknown
mysteries..
Its a drama unwritten
which moves on
yesterday's, today's and tomorrow's sun.....

Its been centuries
sun set
from happiness and
human life
but never rose sun
once till date.

Is this eclipse?

birds now never sings
their beautiful melody
flowers never bloom,
never flourishes its sweet smell
smells are blink of an eye...
neither do rivers flow fluently
flows all way blood and bloods...
we prefer night
we love darkness....
Nature still waits
the sweet voice of
morning bell! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 29 August 2015

A lovely poem, Ismael. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Ismael Subba 03 June 2016

Thanks mohammad asim

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M Asim Nehal 24 September 2015

Awesome poem..........Last line took it all..Nature still waits the sweet voice of morning bell! !

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Ismael Subba 30 August 2015

thanks bhargabi and kelly kurt for your inspiring comments

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Ismael Subba 30 August 2015

thanks kelly kurt for your inspiring comments

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 29 August 2015

Morning sings with very sweet voice like your expression here. Nature still waits to here this. Very interesting and wise imagery is drawn here. Fantastic sharing really....10

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