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Another Lucid Dream

As the scalpel
cuts through my flesh
I am wide awake

As the surgeon tells me
that I will survive
I feel the pain
as he slices through my fingers

As I rise from the table
the surgeon steps back
with a fright

I tell him
I've just realised
I'm lucid dreaming
so I'll see him another time

It's now time
for me to awake from sleeping

Submitted: Saturday, June 01, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 01, 2013


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  • Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/26/2013 5:23:00 AM)

    an amazing poem in dream....and out of it

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  • Smoky Hoss (6/16/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    Vivid dreams, like this poem, are amazing. I can't help pondering what it is our mind, or our heart, is saying to us in dreams such as this. I truly like this poem Dave, very good.

  • Philip Carter (6/9/2013 5:39:00 PM)

    Scary dream, love it.

  • Babatunde Aremu (6/7/2013 6:16:00 AM)

    Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write.

  • Babatunde Aremu (6/7/2013 6:16:00 AM)

    Dream is another world that takes deep thought to pen down like this. Great write.

  • Valerie Dohren (6/4/2013 12:32:00 PM)

    Sounds more like a nightmare rather than a dream - definitely scary.

  • David Wood (6/3/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Surgeons do operate now with the patient awake so how do you know its not a dream, scary.

  • Farah Ilyas (6/2/2013 5:43:00 PM)

    haha bit funny with amazing unique style...well done, thanks for sharing

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