Another Love Epic Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Another Love Epic

Rating: 5.0


Deep blue ocean waves
Crawling at ivory white sandy beach
From a long journey
A thousand miles away
From nowhere

Beautiful bubbles
Foamy as your drools
Enchanting melodies
They possessed
They performed
Were your vocals
To ignite the sounds
Of past
Greatest love

Adam and Eve
Rama and Sita
Leila and Majnun
Romeo and Juliet
And Us



Honey, strawberry and cherry
Vanilla, chocolate and raspberry
And caviar
How to picture you
And frame it
In my heart

Even the sun would make way
For us
Enables the moon
To orchestrate
The smiling skies
Spraying the colours
Of mahogany

We ride the rainbows
To milky way
Embracing the chilling breezing
Of the winds
Of Artic

Your eyes
Your teeth
Are sparkling
Resembling the aurora
Of winter nights
Of northern hemisphere



Your lips
As cold as morning iceberg
Transformed into
Ancient well’s water
Flowing into my body
Flourishing my veins
Cooling me
From your warm body
As warm as a volcanic lava
Whenever we touched

Your odor
Smells like the seven layers
Of earth core
Trembling my brain
Guiding them
Not to forget you
If I do
I’d not be alive
And…
Another Epic
Revived.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I like it...good job pal.

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Sanya Semakula 28 May 2008

Wonderful imagery. Good usgae of words. The poem flowed nicely. emotional piece on love, well thought out and well written. Good read.

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Arhoz Anvi 05 July 2008

Assalaamualaikum Very well written... Mashallah Take care... Arhozie

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Amanda Johnson 29 January 2008

i love it, its VERY deep

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Christian MERLE 06 March 2008

That's love...isn't it?

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Expiallidocious 22 December 2019

It had to be experienced to be so vivid. FABULOUS,

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Naidz Ladia 12 January 2009

a new epic of love ha...its nice..undying admiration..its very beautiful... to the author, , , ur so great, gifted wth fantastic mind, talented-skilled man, a hero for me nd a favorite to some...able 2.put into writes evrything that s ''IN''..THS LINES ARE VERY GOOD, NICE TO READ..hon, ur so great..

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Analou Pabalate 03 October 2008

yea........................nice poem...........

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John Parsons 13 August 2008

You have done a good job with the three sets of allusions, and have made really smooth transitions between them. Good job.

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Rehab Helmy 02 August 2008

no single word can describe how lovely written with high emotions this Love Epic is simply magnificant good luck

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