Another Day Over Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Another Day Over

Rating: 5.0


Crystallized fear
of day and night
light and dark
another day other

One day
they will be no more
so make the most
of what you have

Day and night
light and dark
another day over

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 08 December 2012

Time slips away so quickly, a good reminder to make the most of it Dave

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Gajanan Mishra 01 December 2012

Day and night Light and dark Another day over. Wonderful! I thank you.

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Eric Cockrell 04 December 2012

every moment a precious gift... too often we forget! . thanks for reminding us.

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Farah Ilyas 02 June 2013

Concise & brief but message is given by you is deep...wake up until your time will be over..good diet for the nourishment of our minds...

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Kevin Patrick 20 December 2012

This seems very bleak, but I think I get what you’re saying, its most clear on the second stanza, that what we fear is meaningless for whatever happens, happens so accept it as it is and live your life anyway. Its brief but the message is deep, it gives me something to ponder.

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Lyn Paul 14 December 2012

Yes no one smells the roses anymore when there is so much beautiful in this world to smell and view. We need to wake up before it is too late. Thank you

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Valerie Dohren 13 December 2012

Yes, we should certainly live in the moment and be thankful that we are still here. Great Dave.

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Stan Petrovich 10 December 2012

Having just spent a dismal night, taught & tied in my mental & physical distresses, I can hear what you say. Explicitely.

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