Animals In People Poem by kelly berry

Animals In People

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Children in the playground playing on the swings being like a monkey. As the monkey is swinging in and out of the trees as the wind pass him by.

Baby in the pram sleeping quietly a bit like a mouse. As the mouse is sneaking quietly past the hopeful looking cat that is looking on for coming mice.

Adult sat down talking very loud a bit like a hyena. The hyena has catches it prey and is laughing very loud at it pry trying to any thing to get out.

Teenager sat down quietly keeping their eye on the little ones a bit like a bird. The bird is watching for any trouble that might come passed.

As the world turns people change. People grow up. Deep in side of us we have an animal that grow with our feelings or what we could do. What kind of animal do you think you are today?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
fanniesson - 27 September 2006

the ending I liked never thought of ending a poem of mine with a question good idea enjoyed the read here

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Kee Thampi 07 April 2006

Baby in the pram sleeping quietly a bit like a mouse. As the mouse is sneaking quietly past the hopeful looking cat that is looking on for coming mice. this is a nice story in poem. new writing, experimental, I wish success in this new venture

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