Angels Crying Poem by Rema Prasanaa

Angels Crying

Rating: 4.4


Angels Crying
By Rema Prasanna

Angels cry from heaven’s door
for earth deep down on fire
smoke, blaze reach on crest
fly on rage to leap further
scribbled a farewell on fire
troubeld earth cries aloud.
before the red giant sun
burn and fuse its elements
earth would perhaps die-premature
-not colliding on asteroids
-not knocked down by waves of oceans
-not on fatal earthquakes
-not from droughts or floods
-not from rains or famines
but from tremors of fierce wild terror
and on definite reprisals
fiend humans and their grey brains
eventually kill earth on its orbit....
angels cry aloud from heavens
for a magic wand to defend earth...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 May 2008

i support your quest. together we could save the earth..........the dying earth. the latest were Myanmar and China.what a tragedy.

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Rani Turton 17 May 2008

While more and more methods to spread terrot are being found, innocent people are dying. Is society going wrong? Where has tolerance gone? Thanks for this timely poem, Rema.

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

A pertinent theme and strong expression. Liked this one too!

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Marvin Brato 20 May 2008

Angels have witnessed how perfect God created the earth, now the Angels are crying in pity for man_ God's most beloved creation.... who masterminded his own destruction! This poem substantiated the current happening of our time. A 10.

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Seema Chowdhury 20 May 2008

Rema this is a very nicely composed poem and its good to see that so many poets are drawing attention towards the current events and are concern about what is ahppening. May God Almighty give us courage to fight back and make this a better place to live.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 06 October 2008

Good perception about the future of the earth. Before the earth dies i think human beings will die with their own weight

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Indira Renganathan 10 August 2008

Heavenly verses.Your heart shows soulful concern.Impressive indeed.Thanks a lot for sharing

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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 July 2008

Every poem of yours was composed for a real cause. This is what is expected of a poet. Thank u very much for such fantastic reads. If time lpermits read my BIG BROTHER SYNDROME with regards, sathya narayana

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rohit sapra 14 July 2008

The usage of words and the way they appear to be actually so convincing about the concern of things related to this universe is a good aspect about this poem. Title of the poem also makes one read this poem and when the reader reads it the words go on to show unique style of writing which is really very different about this poem.

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Kyle Shield Laster 12 July 2008

another convicting piece. everyone needs to go GREEN and help save our earth! ! no more contributing to our approaching armagaeddon. i love your pro-earth pieces. really great.

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