Udiah (witness to Yah)

Rookie - 7 Points (1959 / USA)

Angel of Death


In darkness of the night
I spied him in a tree
Sat I froze by the sight
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  • Rookie - 10 Points Anna Boukna (2/8/2015 1:44:00 PM)

    This is a majestically piece of work. So chilling and I cannot imagine anybody disagreeing to this! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,379 Points L. E. O. Gibraltar (1/19/2015 2:39:00 PM)

    What a wonderful yet thrilling piece! I'm glad you escaped the angel of death. Great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 89 Points Wallis Minten (11/10/2014 10:03:00 PM)

    Well written, I loved the style you used. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,554 Points Dinesh Nair (10/23/2014 8:26:00 AM)

    A fine poem followed by an exercise of.....nity! Udaiah, please delete the design' (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,554 Points Dinesh Nair (10/23/2014 8:25:00 AM)

    A fine poem followed by an exercise of.....nity! Udaiah, please delete the design' (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,098 Points John Richter (10/8/2014 8:48:00 AM)

    This is a majestically written poem in a beautiful form. I cannot attest to those naysayers below. Every line, indeed every word is perfectly placed - and couldn't possibly be replaced. The content so alive - so wondrously wrapped into my conscious that I did not even notice the form upon first read. The A-C-a-c- and B-D-b-d are both marvelous and invisible. Very well done, and rather spooky.... Exceedingly Poe like..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,601 Points Ramesh Rai (9/7/2014 3:33:00 AM)

    Only four stanzas of this poem are readable. For rest i do not think it is adding any beauty. But four stanzas are super complex of your imagination (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,601 Points Ramesh Rai (9/7/2014 3:32:00 AM)

    Only four stanzas of this poem are readable. For rest i do not think it is adding any beauty. But four stanzas are super complex of your imagination (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,555 Points Bri Edwards (8/6/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    what's with be in Gazed I on that braz'n be? ? , , , , , , , , being? beast?

    i like it. i like the ryming, and the unique arrangement of words to save words and help make rhymes. i like the contractions and repetition of stanza-ending line.

    To free captivity....this throws me a bit.
    i at least don't mind the repetition of death, nature, fear, and angel, but it makes me think you may have been getting paid per word!

    i read something from google about you. someone (some professor?) said you are a god-believer or somethin', but 'he' also said that your poem indicates that you fear death. i wonder if you ever told anyone that you fear death. hmmm? you can tell us!

    i find it interesting that i (and others) jump to the not-so-based-on-fact conclusion that a poem portrays the author's life or beliefs. it could be that a poem is totally unlike the author. i have to remind myself of this sometimes.
    thanks for sharing. scaredy cat! ! to MyPoemList. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoam Rafael Sanfiel-reyes (5/24/2014 6:51:00 PM)

    the last part is repetitive because its repeats but the poem itself is actually really really good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,206 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/18/2014 9:49:00 AM)

    A good poem and contents very meaningful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zora Lee (5/15/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    That last part though. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joseph Sanchez (4/28/2014 9:38:00 AM)

    i love the choice of words. keep doing what you do: D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Anna Boukna (4/5/2014 10:23:00 AM)

    I love this poem; powerful wordsused there (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 294 Points Daniel Y. (2/7/2014 1:01:00 PM)

    Very good poem. Fear carries one through the poem without breath. I wish there was some realization or personification of the angel's character. I liked this poem, please read some of mine! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Salimni Msalimni (1/1/2014 6:51:00 AM)

    please advice me to imrove my english (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zac Waugh (12/16/2013 9:31:00 PM)

    Amazing writer I love the word flow. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,059 Points Tony Karas (11/29/2013 4:43:00 AM)

    A powerfully intense write... a 10 for sure. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gloria Gutierrez (7/24/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    It's good has a meaning to me and discribs one things in life if you know it or not (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alice Bently (6/22/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    I must fight.. I see.. I thank you.. May you guide me and help me grow. I still want to change.. thank you my friend.. (Report) Reply



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