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(21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

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Angel feet….1907

Fell in a dream munching heaven,
Left just one, did all eleven.

Dreamt of a castle made of cream.
Iced brownie, fairy theme.

Over the heavenly scape I float.
Slurping honey, in a cherry moat.

Princely tall and dark, handsome.
Sword by side and chocolates some.

Slowly approached with nuttela bars.
In deep brown eyes twinkled stars.

Sister jumped and spoiled the show.
Awoken, I frown at a heartless bro.

Rubbed my eyes, yawned a stretch.
Instantly knew what I had to fetch.

Tiptoed to the fridge, but wait! Hark!
May be in shadows a waiting shark.

An ear to mom’s bedroom door.
Heard the musical, papa’s snore.

All clear, I glided on my way.
Barely touched and he cautioned stay.

I flail and squeal, he picks me up,
to see those beaming brimming cups.


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19 july...

Submitted: Sunday, July 18, 2010
Edited: Sunday, January 09, 2011


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  • Karen Sinclair (3/4/2014 2:25:00 PM)

    A really unique piece which made me smile....loved the title too beautifully written sir

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  • Heather Wilkins (9/1/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    excellent recall of child hood days sweet and charming days

  • Yasmeen Khan (2/3/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    It reminices lovely childhood days...'heard the musical, papa's snore'..I picked as my fav

  • Shumaila Bari (9/13/2012 12:04:00 PM)

    A fascinating visit to a Fairy-land captured beautifully. The sweetest one I must say.

  • Marieta Maglas (7/21/2010 2:12:00 PM)

    A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully

  • Indira Babbellapati (7/20/2010 12:15:00 PM)

    you are a master of couplets!

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