saadat tahir

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Angel feet….1907


Fell in a dream munching heaven,
Left just one, did all eleven.

Dreamt of a castle made of cream.
Iced brownie, fairy theme.

Over the heavenly scape I float.
Slurping honey, in a cherry moat.

Princely tall and dark, handsome.
Sword by side and chocolates some.

Slowly approached with nuttela bars.
In deep brown eyes twinkled stars.

Sister jumped and spoiled the show.
Awoken, I frown at a heartless bro.

Rubbed my eyes, yawned a stretch.
Instantly knew what I had to fetch.

Tiptoed to the fridge, but wait! Hark!
May be in shadows a waiting shark.

An ear to mom’s bedroom door.
Heard the musical, papa’s snore.

All clear, I glided on my way.
Barely touched and he cautioned stay.

I flail and squeal, he picks me up,
to see those beaming brimming cups.


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19 july...

Submitted: Sunday, July 18, 2010
Edited: Sunday, January 09, 2011

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  • Freshman - 1,911 Points Ken E Hall (10/16/2014 7:09:00 AM)

    A happy look at children who are all angels at the start of life...now look at you now a master of poetry...loved the poem...regards (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,911 Points Ken E Hall (10/16/2014 7:09:00 AM)

    A happy look at children who are all angels at the start of life...now look at you now a master of poetry...loved the poem...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (3/4/2014 2:25:00 PM)

    A really unique piece which made me smile....loved the title too beautifully written sir (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (9/1/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    excellent recall of child hood days sweet and charming days (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (2/3/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    It reminices lovely childhood days...'heard the musical, papa's snore'..I picked as my fav (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shumaila Bari (9/13/2012 12:04:00 PM)

    A fascinating visit to a Fairy-land captured beautifully. The sweetest one I must say. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 962 Points Marieta Maglas (7/21/2010 2:12:00 PM)

    A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Indira Babbellapati (7/20/2010 12:15:00 PM)

    you are a master of couplets! (Report) Reply

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