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Angel Among Us

You let go of my hand and said you'll be back
but you kept me waiting till now
left me hanging in a world so dead
held up so high on such a breakable thread
I am surrounded by people who are not good
as you were the only one with me who stood
and now I just keep on telling them that you were
an angel among us.

Submitted: Thursday, December 05, 2013
Edited: Thursday, December 05, 2013


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  • Amitava Sur (1/25/2014 3:26:00 AM)

    It's an excellent writing Rubab. A lovely imagery with querries, praise and doubts all at a time.

    You may read my poems, My quest and my dream and Power of truth

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  • Heather Wilkins (1/11/2014 7:11:00 PM)

    this is an excellent write for your age dear. You have a great talent. Keep up the excellent work Enjoyed your poem

  • Geetha Jayakumar (12/8/2013 11:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful write..There is always Angel among us. But they comes in different forms and comes unexpectedly too. So lets keep our eyes open to welcome the Angel once again...Loved it.

  • Valsa George (12/7/2013 5:41:00 AM)

    Hmmm! I cannot believe that this is written by a thirtten year old! ! Amazing write! !

  • Dinesh Nair (12/6/2013 4:33:00 AM)

    .... Even though the person has kept you waiting till now, your sweet attribution of angelic virtue to him/her sounds well and let us hope one day you both will be together again. A fiene write Rubab.

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