RUBAB ATWAL


Angel Among Us


You let go of my hand and said you'll be back
but you kept me waiting till now
left me hanging in a world so dead
held up so high on such a breakable thread
I am surrounded by people who are not good
as you were the only one with me who stood
and now I just keep on telling them that you were
an angel among us.

Submitted: Thursday, December 05, 2013
Edited: Thursday, December 05, 2013

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  • Amitava Sur (1/25/2014 3:26:00 AM)

    It's an excellent writing Rubab. A lovely imagery with querries, praise and doubts all at a time.

    You may read my poems, My quest and my dream and Power of truth (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (1/11/2014 7:11:00 PM)

    this is an excellent write for your age dear. You have a great talent. Keep up the excellent work Enjoyed your poem (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (12/8/2013 11:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful write..There is always Angel among us. But they comes in different forms and comes unexpectedly too. So lets keep our eyes open to welcome the Angel once again...Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (12/7/2013 5:41:00 AM)

    Hmmm! I cannot believe that this is written by a thirtten year old! ! Amazing write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (12/6/2013 4:33:00 AM)

    .... Even though the person has kept you waiting till now, your sweet attribution of angelic virtue to him/her sounds well and let us hope one day you both will be together again. A fiene write Rubab. (Report) Reply

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