Angel Poem by Adryan Barnathan

Angel

Rating: 3.5


An angel came to my door
I can't believe she heard my prayers
Reaching out her fine hand
she pointed to the dream I had
Guiding me onto a road
that takes me on my way-
Can this be?

''Just believe in yourself''
is what she had to say
''You're the obstacle who
is standing in your way''

Switched a gear
now I'm ready
loose the fear-
because the time is here

Here I go



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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 16 May 2006

Travelling so well through the obsticales, with a real strength now within, Beautiful! Love Duncan

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Herbert Nehrlich1 01 January 2005

Very inventive. I had an angel come to my door not too long ago but the message was different. You wrote about it. Well done. H

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