And You Thought You Were the Only One Poem by Mark Bibbins

And You Thought You Were the Only One

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Someone waits at my door. Because he is
dead he has time but I have my secrets-

this is what separates us from the dead.
See, I could order take-out or climb down

the fire escape, so it's not as though he
is keeping me from anything I need.

While this may sound like something I made up,
it is not; I have forgotten how to

lie, despite all my capable teachers.
Lies are, in this way, I think, like music

and all is the same without them as with.
The fluid sky retains regret, then bursts.

He is still there, standing in the hall, insisting
he is someone I once knew and wanted,

come laden with gifts he cannot return.
If I open the door he'll flash and fade

like heat lightning behind a bank of clouds
one summer night at the edge of the world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 19 October 2016

The poet seems to have made an earnest attempt to construct this poem but the words, though, selected painstakingly, do not convey anything sensible. I request the poet to revise the same.

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Seamus O Brian 19 October 2016

One of those poems where it is enjoyable and engaging, but still incomprehensible. Like vising my mother with Alzheimer's. I love her, but she makes no sense. I know that's redundant, but so is pointing it out.

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Mark Bibbins

Mark Bibbins

Albany, New York, United States
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