'' And You Doing Better '' Poem by Bri Mar

'' And You Doing Better ''



Is revenge really sweet?
As good as they say?
A wonderful feat,
Or the root of affray.

On your physical health,
It will take its toll,
Mentally by stealth,
You'll be digging a hole.

When feeling that bad,
Due to another,
It will drive you mad,
But hate you must smother.

By seeking redress,
What will you gain?
Your life in a mess,
Suffering more pain?

Showing you don't care,
Makes it crystal clear,
They need to beware,
You are still here.

Move on in your life,
By burying that past,
That initial strife,
Don't let it last.

Within your own head,
You will soon see,
The issue is dead,
Your mind is now free.

Don't point the finger,
Hatred's a cancer,
Inside it will linger,
Moving on is the answer.

To pointless resentment,
You will not be the debtor,
The reward is contentment,

‘' And You Doing Better ‘'

Monday, January 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: revenge
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 January 2015

Your employment of a 4-6 syllabic count throughout, affords this work a virtually flawless stanzaic structure... Smooooooth, crisp, short cropped linage is an eye pleaser for this Reader...Rock-On, Bri! ~FjR~

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