And My Heart Is Still Crying… Poem by M. Asim Nehal

And My Heart Is Still Crying…

Rating: 5.0


You left me
with a purpose to accomplish
I know not
which way to proceed and replenish
My sentiments are swinging
like a pendulum
egoistic battle is on
between heart and mind
neither you offered
the fragment of years
nor filled the devoid
with the resonance of love
I am in doldrums
with no wings to fly
And feeling detached
from worldly things
The silhouette of your love
has formed an aura around me
And I’m unable to come out of
your breathless impasse
And my heart is still crying
To get you back.

Monday, November 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rahman Henry 23 November 2015

Awesome love poem, wonderfully illustrated.....10++++++++++

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T Rajan Evol 23 November 2015

Fantastic poem Asim, God bless you.

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Kelly Kurt 23 November 2015

Loss of love is one of the most painful things a person ever has to deal with. Nicely written, Mohammed. Thanks

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Darren Jkoeryo 23 November 2015

Heartfelt poetry, In life such mishaps happens take it as they come, man. Very effective writing.

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Ari Alsio 23 November 2015

when the duck to sail must disappoint to keep the stern big sigh the beach

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Deepak S S 20 October 2020

And I’m unable to come out of your breathless impasse And my heart is still crying To get you back.

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Rajnish Manga 02 January 2017

So emotional and so humane. Loss of someone you love is not easy to forget. Great poem. My sentiments are swinging / like a pendulum egoistic battle is on / between heart and mind

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Love and pain! However, hope lies ahead. Thanks for sharing.

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Nishi Kumari 16 January 2016

Where there is love..there is fear of loosing...and where there is loss....there is pain...nice share

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2015

Leaving with purpose of accomplish is very amazing in this nicely drafted poem shared. From worldly things we hold morality of life. Nice sharing.....10

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