Triauna Hall

Rookie - 0 Points (April 21 / Maryland)

...And Deeper - Poem by Triauna Hall

I'm planning your fate right as I speak
I want a souvenir, something nice I can keep
Don't worry, we will never forget you
But right now, I'm planning something for you
Oh it was funny huh? It won't be any more
I'll be the one laughing when you're lying on the floor
Oh you did what you had to do?
Oh true, don't worry, I got you
I'm ready to pounce and take the stand
Oh you 18 huh? Don't make you man
I'll send you back to a little kid
You'll have scars, you won't get rid
It's sad really, what you did
I will burn you alive and leave it lit
I hate to think these things that still haven't left
I do forgive you though, but I'm still planning your death


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Comments about ...And Deeper by Triauna Hall

  • Gold Star - 9,772 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/1/2013 2:18:00 AM)

    Oh My God, I am scared!
    Is this rage of vengeance? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie izzy Barnwell (2/24/2012 7:06:00 PM)

    This is good I like it. I know its not my buisness but what is the story behind this poem? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 4, 2012


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