Shahzia Batool

(Pakistan)

Anarchy ii


I have been searching all this while;
miles n miles,
I know not where i lost my smiles...

My heart's been over brimmed with fears;
years n years,
Oh God! where i have lost my tears...

My soul's been groping since the birth;
on skies n earth,
I'm flustered where i lost my mirth...

I daily shriek to shake the skies;
twice n thrice,
do try to cry, but where are cries...

I have been trying to kill the pain;
but all in vain,
M y God distill some blessed rain...

O Lord! do help me change my mind;
You Just n Kind!
so rest n peace my soul may find...

Submitted: Thursday, March 15, 2012

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  • Rookie - 234 Points Passionate Reader (7/1/2013 11:45:00 AM)

    A soulful and emotive write! ! !

    My soul's been groping since the birth;
    on skies n earth,
    I'm flustered where i lost my mirth...

    Very emotional lines! ! ! The ending is perfect as you ended on an optimistic note! ! ! Stay blessed! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 234 Points Besa Dede (4/23/2013 10:25:00 PM)

    This is such a beautiful poem. I love the way you have written these verses. The poem has a natural flow of words and meaning too. Thank you for sharing.
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 234 Points Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (9/8/2012 2:21:00 AM)

    The solution lies within yourself and no external element is likely to extend a helping hand to dry out your tears of eternal pain experienced.Your agony has a touch of glory and it is what makes you a poet within. Keep sharing your feelings like this and take it for granted that we are sailing in the same boat. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 562 Points Unwritten Soul (5/13/2012 9:43:00 AM)

    Never cry because your eyes is too strong to tear...and through this it shared some feelings that no one know but you..but everybody can feel a bit...it so sad..But Shazia dont cry my friend you know what the end, could be happiness is there waiting for you...that's make you smile later..i love the hope u sown at the last stanza..this is you so courage and bold...i love the poem, especially the last line..full of hope. U must keep stronger Shazia! ! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 770 Points Wahab Abdul (3/17/2012 3:56:00 PM)

    really this is a very meaningful and very sweet in sound poem, very philosophical and inspiring, i love it, the starting is the perfect one and the ending is better with optimism. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 770 Points Viraj Gupta (3/16/2012 10:58:00 AM)

    i have a question.
    The title is anarchy, but in this poem, what i felt was, you are trying to find the old you because of a metamorphosis, and forgive me if i am offensive, how is this anarchist? (Report) Reply

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