Queeny Gona

Veteran Poet - 1,030 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

Anamika - Poem by Queeny Gona

Shall I be addressed?
Abandoned or Orphan!
Name me right,
Who am I?

Had I to blame:
The one who bore me,
Or the one- reason behind my birth
Answer if you can?

Egos’ were given prime importance
And I was left to fate
Not to seek your mere attendance
Let me know the greatest crime I committed?

For letting me deserted
To parch and wither as a barren land
Am I to be left as an orphan?
If you had decided to stay separate?

Who left whom?
Mama... Papa- tell me please
Who decided first?
Is it you, my love?

Yes, love left you
And so you abandoned ME:
The emblem of your love
To be called ANAMIKA!


Comments about Anamika by Queeny Gona

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (11/20/2013 11:01:00 AM)

    This is a gem of a write... nice nice (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,844 Points Wahab Abdul (11/11/2013 8:15:00 AM)

    Egos’ were given prime importance
    And I was left to fate
    Not to seek your mere attendance
    Let me know the greatest crime I committed? ...............i like this stanza most... emotionally charged poem...9 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 46 Points Utsav Patel (11/11/2013 7:49:00 AM)

    Great poem indeed.. Keep penning...
    Read some of my work. Hope you'll like it (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (10/28/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    Anamika meaning unnamed in hindi is an apt title to this emotional poem of yours. It is sad that children feel orphaned because of absence of love due to ego clashes of parents. What will you call this love? Anamika...very true. Well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,755 Points Valsa George (10/28/2013 1:28:00 AM)

    I can gauge the depth of desperation felt by Anamika as I too have dealt with the same topic in two of my poems- Lone Traveller and Bonsai... When you find time, have a look at them! Poignantly narrated, Queeny! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,237 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/28/2013 12:02:00 AM)

    i value your sense of writing. go ahead (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,972 Points David Wood (10/26/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    An inspirational poem. So many young lives are lost to the fate of circumstances. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (10/25/2013 9:32:00 PM)

    An excellent craft of intense feelings so enticingly expressed. The rendering is superb too Queeny. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013


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