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Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 1 Points (26/05/1989)

An Untold Story


Everything around me is telling me an untold story
The winds ask me to approach you
The flowers ask me to woo you
The water suggests me that I am stable and I can do it
The dreams ask me to dare and fly with you
My eyes say that they want to see you every time they open
My hands want that you be the only one whom they hold
My legs what to walk to you, only you
My lips, they want to whisper those secret words to you
My ears, long to hear you
Come to me my dear, and you will hear the heart beat……. It's beating for you! ! ! !



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Submitted: Thursday, April 12, 2012
Edited: Thursday, April 12, 2012

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  • Rookie - 120 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (4/14/2012 8:58:00 PM)

    Wow! my friend, ...you are inlove sister! wish that, that love meets you halfway, and your hearts to beat together as one..lovely love poem Jinal. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (4/13/2012 10:22:00 AM)

    Your mind and soul, now under arrest by the love spell...it pull the string in each part of you to find the source of beat amplifier...it's a sweet and nice poem Jinal..it's a splash of your heart piece_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,549 Points Hans Vr (4/12/2012 10:05:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful love poem, Jinal. very nicely written. Wish your dreams come true (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sharad Juneja (4/12/2012 12:44:00 PM)

    Now these words emerge when someone is in love.......n distances r thr or whn someone really wants to fall in luv.....nice write (Report) Reply

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