An Unforgettable Dawn Poem by Akhtar Jawad

An Unforgettable Dawn

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It was dusk of a moonless night,
No moon is below the blue umbrella,
Stars are there and still it's bright,
I am walking with lovely sweet Cinderella.

Hand in hand her head on the shoulder,
We just whisper and we don't talk,
Right hand is free to touch the molder,
Someone in hide is sharing her walk!

See her smile a dim light is induced,
I can look in her eyes and read her dreams,
Listen to the beats that hearts have produced,
I can touch her breasts with milky streams.

She is hopeful of a dawn with a shining sun,
I say want a moon that is her duplicate,
Light we need it's a moon or a warming sun,
Dawn comes with a sun but He changed the fate.

All pains all worries I today excise,
A beautiful moon comes into my arms,
What a dawn is it when sun did not rise!
Just like her mother she is full of charms.

Monday, January 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: daughter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The dawn brought a beautiful daughter for us.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 13 January 2015

All pains all worries I today excise, A beautiful moon comes into my arms, What a dawn is it when sun did not rise! Just like her mother she is full of charms.............................awesome write...like it

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Valsa George 13 January 2015

On a beautiful dawn, a lovely daughter was born to you as lovely as her mother! It must have been a great moment of rejoicing! I too share your joy!

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Sarmad Mirza 12 January 2015

Very Beautiful poem with lovely thought :)

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Khalid Saifullah 12 January 2015

It's an amazing and beautiful write.....................10

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