An Open Window Poem by Narayanan Ramakrishnan

An Open Window



Chill in the air, chirpng birds on the trees,
Sun slowly brightening, eating up darkness
I began my morning walk, for the day's
Newspaper and milk, hardly away, a kilometer.

Ladies fresh from their bath, making beeline to temple
Rushing fast, before the street lights are put out
Even in that brightening darkness, I could smell the beauty,
Not only see it in glimpses but can have the feel also.

Others are sweeping, cleaning and watering their house fronts;
Some are so busy, even to lock up their fronts
Opened up for their last night's thrust,
My eyes, gobbling up fast whatever on offer.

Returning back, I got the best sight one can long for,
My ogling eyes caught a young couple in arms,
Melting into one another, standing and oozing pleasure,
unaware of the window left open,
I stood thunderstruck, having witnessed a performance live.

I went past, my heart throbbing to reach home fast,
So that my cascading feelings finds its rhythm with my betterhalf
Rushed forgetting the milk and milk booth enroute
Shell shocked to find herself, too, away worshipping.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenny Gordon 21 April 2011

Wow! Impressive! I LOVE this! Glued to it, word-after-word, line-after-line, drinking in all the scenery and imagery, the sights, and almost the sounds, the sentiments, culminating in....Frustration! What a perfect surprise ending! Beautifully done! Wonderful! I very much enjoyed all you presented, taking the reader with you to enjoy this all. Delightful! ! ! ! So aptly titled too, as an 'open window'....a window on your world, which was a window on so much else. Excellent!

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Cristina Teodor 18 April 2011

In the peace of nature, in the normality of daily routine among people, 'a open window' revealed to you the passion of lovers hug. What is behind that window is above our understanding, is the nature taking its course as God let it be, it's the life following the path.Well penned poem..Cristina Teodor

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