(September 3,1992)

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An Open Letter

Oh! Thy King! Shall I tell something true?
At same time, I humbly bow down to you!
With resonating words, you've captured my heart!
Not 'Little', but 'BIG', You're the king of this art

Losing your Prince, and parting with Queen!
I understand, that how hard it has been
This surmounting pain, and heart-wrenching loss
Whats in our hand? How can anyone press 'pause'?

God was jealous, he knew you were the best
He was afraid! So he did put you to test
Being strong deep inside! You made out alive!
You proved fate was wrong and that you can survive!

I plead now my King! We'll write new epic!
Future shall glory and will have your relic!
Have faith on me! For I'll be by your side!
A Fan, loyal friend, I vow! You are my pride!

Submitted: Wednesday, March 06, 2013
Edited: Thursday, March 07, 2013

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this poem for my fellow poet 'Little King of Sorrows'. Once you start to read his poems, you'll know, he's great. He's just too great!

This is to you my King!

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  • Anoop Nair (3/26/2013 10:00:00 PM)

    You got some talent man

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  • Patricia Grantham (3/12/2013 2:04:00 PM)

    What strong words with rythm and rhyme for a young lad like you Aswath. Long live the King.
    Really appreciate this strong piece of poetry

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  • Valsa George (3/9/2013 6:10:00 AM)

    Here, I see a true friend coming to the aid of someone he intensely loves and strengthening him with all his little might! ! To have such a friend is perhaps a real boon when we are surrounded by fair weather friends! Little King is honoured, no doubt! !

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  • Unwritten Soul (3/7/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with nice wording! ! you did it very nice Aswath, but sure God didnt jealous He make things harder because He wanted to make your friend going higher especially it provokes our mind to be stronger and be a fighter! _Soul

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  • Lu Conner (3/7/2013 6:40:00 AM)

    I guess anyone would feel honored to receive a poem like this one in its recognition :) I agree with you, Little King Of Sorrows, is a great poet.

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  • Little King Of Sorrows (3/6/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    You sincerely moved me my friend. I humble myself before you. You sir, are true friend. A king is only as good as the kingdom he watches over. You have brought me much joy and pride with your understanding of my struggle. Your #1 fan....speechless....thank you

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (3/6/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    A nice consoling and motivating letter to a fellow poet.It shows the love and deep regard you entertain for your friend! As ever your poem construction is elegant with rhyme and rhythm.!

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  • Gajanan Mishra (3/6/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    fate is always strong. thanks.

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