An Open Letter (Part 1) Poem by Malaya Roses

An Open Letter (Part 1)



An Open Letter (Part 1)
© 2012 Malaya Roses

I wrote a letter
Named a society to receive it
Dusty trashes upon a white paper
Empty the blackest ink
I wrote an innate hope of life
Complimented with a past fated word
Society and liability
Waging such spectacular modesty poured
Onto a plain trackless line
On the very same letter
I drawn a face of mine
Some broken truths
Obscuring spring of wisdom
Thoughtfulness is too late to heal
It was me,
Bleed to death
Severely damage by time
Comprehension
Passing moment of dejection
Fought a complete soullessness
Within a same letter
Contributed deed was on tears
Attribution was forced to silent
Never been appreciated,
Sincerely.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 13 March 2012

What a poem it is! I like the poem because of its dealing with the theme in a very lucid and simple way, I like your diction, and the way you put the things together, it could have not been better, really you are a talented one, I like attitude too, all these qualities make your poem a beautiful piece of art…I wish you a success in the poetic world, and I like you to read my poems especially ‘’I want to die’’

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