An Open Boat Poem by Alfred Noyes

An Open Boat

Rating: 2.6


O, what is that whimpering there in the darkness?

'Let him lie in my arms. He is breathing, I know.
Look. I'll wrap all my hair round his neck' - 'The sea's rising,
The boat must be lightened. He's dead. He must go.'


See - quick - by that flash, where the bitter foam tosses,
The cloud of white faces, in the black open boat,
And the wild pleading woman that clasps her dead lover
And wraps her loose hair round his breast and his throat.


'Come, lady, he's dead.' - 'No, I feel his heart beating,
He's living, I know. But he's numbed with the cold.
See, I'm wrapping my hair all around him to warm him.' -
- 'No. We can't keep the dead, dear. Come, loosen your hold.

'Come. Loosen your fingers.' - ' O God, let me keep him!' -

O, hide it, black night! Let the winds have their way!
And there are no voices or ghosts from that darkness,
To fret the bare seas at the breaking of day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 13 June 2018

This poe evokes death with a fright.

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Ruta Mohapatra 13 June 2018

So sad, so poignant! Thanks for sharing!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 June 2018

Such a well written poem by Alfred Noyes👍👍👍

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2018

There in the darkness! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 13 June 2018

Nicely works is done here with the lively images well painted in this poem...

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Glen Kappy 13 June 2018

My first time reading this, but I’m interested to explore more of Noyes’ poetry. This well-crafted poem with a minimum of words conveys a poignant story of survival at sea and grief. -GK

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Adrian Flett 13 June 2018

Telling rhymes when they force the need for action. 'he's numbed with cold'. 'come loosen your hold'. A sad poem where we have no power to enter or change life as and when it departs.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 June 2018

Come. Loosen your fingers.' - ' O God, let me keep him! ' -.....so touching. Beautiful poem.

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