An Ode To An Amphibian Poem by Valsa George

An Ode To An Amphibian

Rating: 5.0


You don’t have to pitch a tent
Nor build a house to stay
When thousands wander weary and vexed
Without a home or place to rest,

You own a house with a magic door
That opens at will without key or latch
Well protected from all wicked wight
Safe from all robbers, rowdies and rodents

No evil spirits, vampires or ghouls
Dare to disturb it at any rate
It is stronger than all structures extant
Built in mortar, bricks or rocks

You are monarch of a larger empire
Land and water are under your sway
Free to enjoy the treasures of the sea
And feast on the wonders of the land

You are companion to ravenous shark
Darting spectres through azure dark
And monsters that savagely roam the deep
With their uncouth gambols and abrupt leap

You love strolling along slimy strands
And dive down along with laughing waves
You bury your eggs on sandy shores
And guard your progeny from all snares

You are another name for alertness and caution
You make sure that all around is safe and secure
Before you come out from your rocky shelter
But shrink back at once when dangers lurk

You carry on your back your home and shelter
Built so compact to guard from all external threat
Oh! Turtle, we deem you blessed under your carapace
But perhaps you may have a different tale to tell

For all that we see or seem to see
Aren’t they truths far removed from the truth?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 June 2013

A turtle withdraws itself to save its life and buries its eggs. Beware of turtle like humans. Nice poem.

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Bri Edwards 05 June 2013

a nice record of a turtle, but, valsa, i was taught that a turtle is a reptile rather than an amphibian (see the title) . i thought you were going to speak of amphibians as i did (one kind at least) in my poem salamander. by the way, i enjoyed/appreciated your comment on mine. did you really hear that salamanders are extinct. who would say such a thing? ! but i have read numerous times that amphibians are feeling the ill effects of their changing environments. maybe someone was referring to a particular species of salamander. bri

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Valerie Dohren 06 June 2013

Interesting write, very descriptive of a Turtle - enjoyed reading.

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R.j. Wynn 06 June 2013

Turtles are cool, people are scared.

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R.j. Wynn 06 June 2013

Turtles are cool, people are scared.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2019

Part - 2 laughing waves. She turtle buries her eggs on sandy shores and guards her progeny from all snares. When turtle makes sure that all around is safe and secure it comes out from its rocky shelter and when dangers lurk it shrinks back at once. This poem is a great ode to turtle, an amphibian. Thank you dear madam I vote ten for you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2019

Part - 1 You have so vividly captured the picturesque of a turtle in this poem. The turtle doesn't pitch a tent nor build a house to stay. Its carapace does the function of a house. As it is an amphibian it can live both in water and on land. It is companion to ravenous shark. It loves strolling along slimy strands and to dive down along with

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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

Enjoyed this unique poem on an unique creature.................10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 August 2014

Oh! what a tribute to a turtle-dove......Valsa......I am speechless......every sentence so delicately scripted...... Really takes my breath out......May God bless you with many such amazing poems that you may pen to assuage many a soul........10/10

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Tribhawan Kaul 24 August 2013

Great ode to a turtle. Loved this one.

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