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An Occidental Sun

The girl in
Old Persian miniatures
Eyebrows' mystery

In the sparks of her eyes
All sense of history

A coquettish smile
Ruby-red white pearl

Rising red smoke
In my head
Lovingly whirl

An occidental sun
Rose in my heart

She fills the hollows and gives
A new start

Submitted: Sunday, September 09, 2012
Edited: Sunday, September 09, 2012

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  • Rupika Alekhya (11/8/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    Good description..
    and a happie ending :)

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  • * Sunprincess * (10/30/2012 2:58:00 AM)

    love the imagery..excellent.. :)

  • Reihaneh Jalalian (10/28/2012 2:14:00 AM)

    She fills the hollows and gives
    A new start

    wow i loved the way u ended it
    that was wonderful

  • Www. (9/24/2012 8:23:00 AM)

    Real love will ever surge forward.. All the best ahead to my old friend Persian Nightingale

  • Ellias Anderson (9/12/2012 12:12:00 PM)

    Well, this should be embraced by me for sure. because this work is so great and meaningful.
    well done.

  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (9/9/2012 11:26:00 PM)

    pictorial poetic stuff/fine as usual

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