An Introspection Poem by Rajesh Thankappan

An Introspection



Into the dark recesses of my elusive mind
I tiptoed silently with candlelight;
To thoughtfully watch the curious mind
That proliferate thoughts, away from my sight.

I would like to discover ‘who I am’
The ‘who’ the ‘I’, the stranger lurking in me,
Get introduced to him as well as I can
Advice ‘him’ in the light of the vision that I see.

The real ‘I’ in ‘me’ is a reclusive being
Elusive, evasive and always self-justifying
I caught a glimpse of him prancing and fleeing
Into the dark wilderness where he lives in hiding!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It is a good poem that arouse the Bhagavat Gita sloka,13: 1.Kshetra Kshetragna explanation in me.

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Valsa George 19 December 2014

What a paradox..... We are strangers to ourselves! The real 'I' in me is always hiding! How 'I' appear outside is only a fake and the' I' here is only my shadow! The last stanza is an icing on the cake! Enjoyed much!

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Queeny Gona 27 September 2013

The real I in me? Great introspective write of yours is really wonderful!

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 June 2013

Yes Nasarudheen, it is a primordial truth.

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 June 2013

Thank you Survi for having gone through the poem and liked it.

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Survi Sharma 28 June 2013

wow great poem with the best title and description

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