An Hour Spent With You Poem by Duku Akwasi Odwaa Boffour

An Hour Spent With You

Rating: 4.5


Things does not get better overnight
Neither loving someone is so simple
But loving you is a chance that came overnight
I have dedicated my life to doing good
But with you I do best things
An hour spent with you
Is like a thousand years
When you smile or laugh
You make the whole world
A paradise for the poor
A poor man like me
You told us you are boring
But to me you are an excellent entertainer
I couldn't believe the parting time came
And I turned to you for you last smile
Thank you so much for your kindness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 May 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ramesh Rai 07 October 2013

An hour spent with you Is like a thousand years When you smile or laugh You make the whole world A paradise for the poor A poor man like me loved your write

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Alookh (matin) 21 August 2013

i liked ur poem! my fave line: Thank you so much for your kindness it was new... thanking for kindness! ! :)

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Mohammed Albalushi 07 April 2013

wonderful poem, specially this link (A pradise for the poor)

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