Duku Akwasi Odwaa Boffour

Rookie - 13 Points (12 June 1985 / Nkawie)

An Hour Spent With You


Things does not get better overnight
Neither loving someone is so simple
But loving you is a chance that came overnight
I have dedicated my life to doing good
But with you I do best things
An hour spent with you
Is like a thousand years
When you smile or laugh
You make the whole world
A paradise for the poor
A poor man like me
You told us you are boring
But to me you are an excellent entertainer
I couldn't believe the parting time came
And I turned to you for you last smile
Thank you so much for your kindness

Submitted: Tuesday, April 02, 2013
Edited: Monday, October 13, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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Comments about this poem (An Hour Spent With You by Duku Akwasi Odwaa Boffour )

  • Gold Star - 11,601 Points Ramesh Rai (10/7/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    An hour spent with you
    Is like a thousand years
    When you smile or laugh
    You make the whole world
    A paradise for the poor
    A poor man like me
    loved your write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Alookh (matin) (8/21/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    i liked ur poem! my fave line: Thank you so much for your kindness
    it was new... thanking for kindness! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Mohammed Al-balushi (4/7/2013 12:23:00 AM)

    wonderful poem, specially this link (A pradise for the poor) (Report) Reply

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