An Eye Opener Poem by Vidi Writes
An Eye Opener
No one to hear, no one to heal
Life seemed never unpeel
Prose, poetry lost zeal.
Climbed the hilltop to shout
Amplifier fitted into gullet
To make the heaven heard.
“No love, no mercy
No peace, no life”
Felt, my voice reached sky high.
Amazed at the sight below
He, she and them – all present
Felt, at last I am heard.
Murmurs of bottom
Reached cliff top
Felt, all were concerned.
Saw a pool at bottom
Wondered, what the source was
Felt, all were crying below.
Handicapped, still
Someone was climbing
Felt, trying to reach to console.
A blind with deaf
Were also present
Felt, ‘heart listens and directs’
A few four legged
Scrolling and hopping
Felt, they too were moved.
A desire to reach them all
Arose in mind
Legs, took me to descend from top.
There is love, mercy, peace and life
When we are below with one and all
Pinnacle opened my eyes.
-vidi-
07-06-08
a shift in percption changes everything. vision is the art of seeing the invisible. hearfelt. the heart listens and directs - well composed poem Vidi.
A poem on mercy and compassion Words pearl like underneath ocean Felt, must say a good poem this one So I say this is a very good poem, Vidi!
This was a wonderful idea for a poem that is full of humanism. Thank you, Vidi.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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as beauty lies in the eyes of beholder the love seems to rave up by the feeling shadow still changes its shape in time and space light is when spectra of seven colors.............................lovely poem when joyful, well penned, thanks for sharing