An Eye For An I Poem by Marieta Maglas

An Eye For An I

Rating: 5.0


An all-seeing eye of the cosmos opened
within me, having an epistemic sense of
power. The rain trickled down the oval-shaped
wet window. It wasn't a blue eye, yet 'twas bluing.
The blues of the stars
were trickling
out of their core. Over
your tasting part of the tongue full of sensations,
suffering words
struck the silence between us. I could not
comprehend their sense- their meaning
sank in the sadness of the rain.
The blues were absorbed by this rising dreariness.
I couldn't see you. Nor could I
achieve the tranquility of my mind. However,
I might presume that God might see this.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Wednesday, November 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
References: The Early Heidegger and Meister Eckhart philosophy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 19 November 2014

A thoughtful poem.......................................

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2014

your tasting part of the tongue full of sensations about itself, suffering words.. nice lines best part of life is silence that offers chance to recover in peace and reply at an ease

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Captain Herbert Poetry 23 November 2014

truly an inspiring poem- voted 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2014

'An Eye for An I' is deeply and nicely envisioned. Thanks.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 22 November 2014

This is very heavenly scripted with powerful feelings.......Marieta......amazing write.......well-deserved 10

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Ramesh Rai 20 November 2014

I might presume that God might see this. Powerful expression of thought. Nice job.

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Ramesh Rai 20 November 2014

I might presume that God might see this. Powerful expression of thought. Nice job.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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