An Evening Walk Poem by kite remedy
An Evening Walk
An evening walk,
just after both of us talked.
I walked her home afterward,
through a breezy boulevard.
I saw her cold and I was alerted,
from my shoulders to hers, I nudged my jacket.
At her boarding house I left her be,
and I tiptoed across the street.
I turned my back to catch her greeting
she sent me in her hand waving.
I passed a building and so a field,
a content feeling suddenly built.
I tripped along the way alone,
it had been half a distance home.
I rose my head to look at the cloud,
at the beautiful canvas I wanted to applaud
and an evening walk I took in delight,
whilst the day rested in twilight..
the gimmick of love makes this poem makes a real feel turned my back to catch her greeting she sent me in her hand waving. I passed a building and so a field, a content feeling suddenly built.
Some moments are beautiful..................to ponder.
excellent poem great write, you have put beautiful scenery and beautiful emotions together, nice one
a very beautiful write indeed, you sketch it very well and surely those momments are never forgetable....thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif
An evening walk can cover many aspects of life, you have mentioned yours and I have mentioned mine! Do read my poem 'AN EVENING WALK'! -Raj Nandy
Compact composition.........beautiful words chosen.......great! ......10+++
Lovely..very passionate..the feeling of contentment..of the blooming love.. Expressive words..Great write!
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 1:17:23 AM # 1.0.0.1119
beautiful...thanks for sharing