An Evening At A Beach Poem by vijay menon

An Evening At A Beach

Rating: 5.0


Let’s talk while we walk on the sandy beach
The moon kissed sand cold under our feet
Makes our feeling’s warm, desires hot

Twosome we make a nice pair
Let me hold your hands and kiss you
My dear on your lascivious lips
Let’s club our feelings and make it one

We have lot to know and lot to do
My dear come close to me be by my side
The surf is sweeping under our feet

Let me lift you and smooch you
To my hearts content
Lets enjoy this evening
And make a day to remember
In the days and years to come

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 22 September 2009

very fine........................

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 October 2009

a fine romantic poem...very good to read....10

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Dr. Sonal Chhaya 30 September 2009

Very romantic..Nice write Thans for sharing

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Antonio Liao 30 September 2009

Hmmmmm....got a relaxing lines....the ecstasy of wonder lay in the concept you share...very beautiful for reflection....thank you and God bless a 10

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Mohammed Albalushi 29 September 2009

very romantic, i like the way you wrote this poem and i do love walking on beach at evening time, its very inspirer environment for poets espevially when is full, well write dear ++10

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Sandra Martyres 23 September 2009

A nice romantic evening at the beach...fine write Vijay

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