An Epitaph To A Broken Heart. Poem by Graham Jones

An Epitaph To A Broken Heart.

Rating: 4.6


Take heed a tortured heart to heal
Scarred and bruised like orange peel
Worn, now empty cast aside
Like so much flotsam on the tide

It beats a lonely tune for one
Devoid of feeling, cold and numb
Its melody, now a requiem
That rides the wind of distant fen

Empty cold its essence gone
No spark or magic to keep it strong
Battered by the tears of time
No longer hers and barely mine

Deprived of hope, its plea's unheard
Its grief unshared, a wounded bird
Turned inside out, and torn apart
An epitaph to a broken heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Solomon Brook 30 January 2006

Very nicely done. The sequence was tight with well arranged descriptions of emotion. Be encouraged to continue sharing. Thanks.

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Scarlett Treat 06 February 2006

Pain hurts, doesen't it?

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Linda Ori 01 February 2006

Graham - How well I understand, and how well you put it into words......Love it! Linda

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Bridgid Patrick 30 January 2006

beautiful poem, .. keep up the good work. x

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Ernestine Northover 30 January 2006

Another lovely flowing poem, a lovely read as well. I loved it very much. Love Ernestine XXX Just thought I would mention that 'epitath' needs to be corrected to 'epitaph'. You can eidt it on the edit your poems page. Hope you don't mind me mentioning this. Love E.

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Mary Nagy 30 January 2006

I liked this very much Graham....I think you've described this feeling that most of us have experienced beautifully. Sincerely, Mary

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