An Epilogue To A Girl Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
An Epilogue To A Girl
You’re richer than wealth...
beauty than diamonds...
but with hollow heart..
melted like an ice-cream
I saw a girl is in dilemma..
to get the real meaning of humanization...
good and bad..
pretty and ugly..
hate and love..
a dilemma
Take me away...far..
Far away..
to the place....
I would craze
for taste
The vastness of horizon...
will penetrate the ozone of...
eternity...
the eternal life
beyond lives
The world we lived in
is the scenes of movies
Fantasies do exist
in a dreams
of bliss
The mind is the key to a vast horizon
You have perfectly stormed the poetic avalanches
I'm coming through...
the train of prosperity and goodness
Your sacred heart
will be hunted by many enthusiasts....
quite good, I very much enjoyed that one (my favorite of yours i guess)
so many things i felt while reading this... not goodness nor bad...but a wealth of power...that the girl must hold... when you read others do you interpret it based on your own experiences? i feel like the girl is me as i am the girl..
Made me sigh at the end, thinking of goodness. Wonderful poem, Sulaiman X's and O's
This one really impressed me Sulaimon. You wrote with a skill that said you had done this before. There were no stumbles along the way. This was very hard to do, and i recognize it as such. A wonderful job on a difficult task. GW62
Sulaiman, I did enjoy this one - The vastness of horizon... will penetrate the ozone of... eternity... was some nice imagery. Good job!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Your poem is awash with metaphor and originality. I think you are contrasting the 'world lived in movies' with the vast horizon of universality. Your subject with the 'hollow heart' is perhaps capable of redemption 'your sacred heart' - or so it seems to me. You have a great feel for language Salaiman and a passionate, fertile poetic mind. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥