An Enclave Poem by Sandra Fowler

An Enclave

Rating: 5.0


I leave you my abbreviated dusk,
A patch of blue upon a distant hill.
Fog fingers write my feelings on the glass.
Those urgent words once set the bones alight.

Friend, let that once be powerful enough
To hold time's shadow to its measurement.
West's fated slant across a million roofs
Creates an enclave worthy of itself.

Previously published, 'The International Library Of Poetry'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 13 March 2007

'Abbreviated dusk' is a brilliant image and leads the reader eloquently into your elusive picture painted in soft pastels and rich with emotional tension. A fine poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 13 March 2007

You always put so much into your writing Sandra, and I think that often our theme is the same or at least similar Eitherway..This is yet another beautiful piece Take care love duncan x

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Uriah Hamilton 13 March 2007

I'm going to that distant hill to gather little poems that you've left for me like manna from heaven. Uriah

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Patrick Ladbrooke 14 March 2007

You always seem to find the words that haunt. A beautiful and memorable poem from one of the most accomplished writers published here. Patrick

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Will Barber 15 March 2007

A sort of swooning delight overcomes the reader. The twilight moves incessantly around the world - a million roofs, and your patch of blue most poignant. Truly, I loved this one - especially the phrase 'set the bones alight' - ah, every soul should know one such moment. - Will

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 31 March 2007

Always different... always captivating... always excellent... and of course, always Sandra!

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Goldy Locks 31 March 2007

does time's shadow have a measurement? will you find out & let me know. abbreviated dusk. fog fingers. kisskiss. sjg

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Robert Howard 24 March 2007

This beautiful poem taps our memories and captures a treasured mood that escapes our total comprehension. Very much an enclave.

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Magda Graf 24 March 2007

A truly beautiful poem that opens the mind.

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Mary Das 21 March 2007

Awesome! I enjoyed reading this poem.

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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