An Empty Heart Poem by sandy nobody

An Empty Heart

Rating: 4.7


an empty heart, doesnt care
an empty heart has, no love to share

an empty heart, is a lonely one
an empty heart, is like a stone

an empty heart, has no compassion
an empty heart, cannot get satisfaction

an empty heart, cannot cry
an empty heart, might as well die

an empty heart, is so sad
my hearts not empty,
and im glad

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Graham Jones 11 July 2006

Wonderful little write.

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Sam Sayegh 16 August 2006

hey sandy...ur poem is great especially when reaching its end...' im glad '..but between us...u always mention ' A EMPTY HEART'.... shouldny it be ' AN empty heart? ? ''..sorry for bothering...thanks

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Jim Foulk 15 December 2006

NICE POEM IT IS NICE EVEN WITH THE A EMPTY HEART, IT IS WHAT YOU FEEL IT IS YOUR HEART REACHING OUT TO SOMEONE YOU LOVE, THAT IS WHAT MATTERS.

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David Harris 21 July 2014

A lovely poem, sad but all too often true. congratulations, you're able to put your feelings into words.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 06 June 2009

No one has an empty heart

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I AM SOOO OUT OF HERE 12 June 2008

I've known a few people with the empty heart you speak of..and it is sad. So glad it's not you also. AIAB

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Patti Bonilla 30 October 2007

Your poem is so true! I can't help it Sandy, I'm in education so here it goes.. a empty heart is incorrect- it should say an empty heart-other than that-your poem expresses love. Keep writing girl! let your soul speak!

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Charley60 K 24 January 2007

Sandy this is a very good write. Describes perfectly how one who can't love or never to be satisfied for their heart is empty-they have no heart. I am like you in this-that I am glad I don't have an empty heart.

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