An Ellipse Not A Circle Poem by Akhtar Jawad

An Ellipse Not A Circle

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I am an orbiting point,
I am moving in a way such that,
The sum of my distances from two fixed points,
The left and right focal points,
Always remains the same,
My locus is an ellipse.

When my distance from the left focal point point is minimum,
My distance from from the right focal point is maximum,
When my distance from the left focal point is maximum,
My distance from the right focal point is minimum.
This is because I am a son of Adam and a son of Eve,
Sometimes I am pretty and some times so ugly.

I am keeping the two focal points away from each other,
In case they coincide and merge, I shall become an extremist,
The ellipse will be a circle, and I shall not remain moderate,
I shall act like a robot, I shall not remain a human being,
Either I shall be an angel,
Or I shall be a devil.

Oh Almighty God! I don't desire to become an angel,
Chances are there I shall become a devil,
I know You are benevolent I know You are kind,
You will over look my ugliness, and look at my beauty,
Don't make me a locus of a dangerous circle,
Let my locus remain as an ellipse.

Wednesday, May 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: prayer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I desire and pray to remain moderate.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 07 May 2014

Oh Almighty God! I don't desire to become an angel, Chances are there I shall become a devil. True words have never been spoken of the human condition, the duality of our natures is such that we try to be one but become the other. Great metaphors a super read!

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 December 2016

A philosophic poem, ..........................................................................

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Valsa George 02 July 2014

There are twin forces pulling man from opposite sides... that of evil and of good. No man can be all evil nor completely virtuous... We have to strike a desirable balance! A well thought out poem!

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Sarmad Mirza 09 May 2014

a very very mathematical poem but being a student of maths I grasped it.

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 May 2014

Wow! This comes from your inner depth and displayed a great skills. I love how you think my dear poet friend.

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 May 2014

Wow! This comes from your inner depth and display great skillmanship. I love how you think my dear poet friend. Nice piece from a thoughtful soul. Bravo!

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