An Away Message Poem by Melissa Ferrer

An Away Message

Rating: 5.0


God didnt promise
Days without Pain
Laughter without Sorrow
and Sun without Rain
But He did promise
Stregnth for the Day
Comfort for the Tears
and Light for the Way..

So at the moment i am not Here...
Im off enduring the pain the Laughter and the Tears
In all my fourteen years, I have never known...
That it was all meant to be..
Till now when i see...
That he is comforting me..

So im away
and i dont know if i will be back today
But I will definitely be back...
In time to help you pray...
In time to be there
for you
when you need me most

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Williams 28 March 2006

A brilliant poem with some great religious imagery

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Gregory Gunn 26 June 2006

The best I've read from you thus far, Melissa. Demonstrates a high level of maturity and wisdom.

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Kevin Deckert 10 May 2006

Really, really, really great poem, great flow, and really good idea! kev

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Terry Brewer 08 April 2006

Melissa - a wonderful poem and a lovely flow of language. I lookd forward to reading more of your poems Terry

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Kee Thampi 06 April 2006

God didnt promise Days without Pain Laughter without Sorrow and Sun without Rain But He did promise Stregnth for the Day Comfort for the Tears and Light for the Way.. Hi you make a good poem, with great visions and shadow of life, wish for best

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Anteneh Mekuria 05 April 2006

Realy it is great poem from any asspect, i can't say nothing more.keep it up!

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