An Authentic Love Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

An Authentic Love

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An authentic love
For the tunes
A reason to get up
In the afternoon
Relating to people
Building a bridge
Between love and life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 13 September 2009

The most 'authentic love ' is the one which builds bridges.... this is a fine point made in a fine verse..... Fay

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Kuji Soliman 15 September 2009

very very nice poem ahmad....very nice

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Juan Carlos Abeti 15 September 2009

good one, short an direct.

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Anjali Sinha 17 September 2009

short and sweet good write...........

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 September 2009

A truth of love. it gives us a reason to live...lets share it with the whole world!

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Louis Rams 26 September 2009

may that bridge spread throughout the world

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Eyan Desir 24 September 2009

Good write...10s....................

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Ruerd Visser 22 September 2009

Well said in only a few lines you open up a whole world waiting to be dsicovered. Thanks for sharing it with us! Boomwhisperer Ruerd

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Omar Ibrahim 22 September 2009

build a brige between love and life....i loved this line.....good poem my friend

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Rafique Farooqi 18 September 2009

bridge between love and life.................a meaningful poem to read

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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