! ! ! ! ! ! ! An Appointment, I Await! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! An Appointment, I Await! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.3


Right on time,
I said as I smiled
And put my glass of
Cointreau aside.

Just wait,
Let me put this clock away,
Its ticking,
Feels like an intrusion.
For now
I want to believe you will
Hold me till eternity
In silence

Am filled with ecstasy
As you embrace me
In stillness
While no one is prying.

Life in a metro
Is like a whirring machine.
O Night
In your arms
I forget
And rejuvenate.
You are the only one
Who never forgets
Our appointment.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

'Life in a metro Is like a whirring machine.' Very nice poem, the way you penned is very nice. Love it with 10+

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Joseph Poewhit 16 May 2009

The clock moves slow with love

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

I want to believe you will Hold me till eternity In silence sweet lines and done very well in romantic way..the whole poem is written in best way... well done 10 +++

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R.k Das 25 May 2009

tremendous spontaneity and intensity, very compact, difficult to replace a single word. loved the title, there is a corporate professionalism about the title, which drew me to it.nice poem,

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 May 2009

'Life in a metro Is like a whirring machine.' You have briefly composed an appointment with care. Lovely poem.

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Raj Nandy 21 May 2009

When meeting someone the heart desires, 'time' melts away in passion's smouldering fire! And in Lord Byron's poetic style, - 'an instant' turns to 'eternity' - just for a while! - Raj Nandy. Mamta ji for your poem 10! I think you will like my poem - 'LOVE UNDER THE INCA SKY', - on page no.1.

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Sandra Martyres 16 May 2009

Another great piece Mamta....simple yet brings out the essence of life and love in the metros....10++ from me

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