An Amusing Find Poem by Captain Cur

An Amusing Find

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I went and found myself a muse
one revered in the ancient hymns,
her presence small and spirit bright.
I cannot refuse her slightest whims.

I fell in love with what I found,
she was far; yet, within my reach,
it was the contact of that touch
that bound my flesh and winsome speech.

It wasn't conquest that I sought,
just love, not war, this truth survives,
my words that pageant throughout time
complete surrender best describes.

The words I write are slowly formed
lettered by years of silent mind
that listened deep and rarely spoke
you now awoke with lessoned time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Mazumdar 02 June 2014

good & spirited one. go on writing

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Heather Wilkins 06 June 2013

I went and found myself a muse, her presence small and spirit bright I cannot refuse her slightest whims. lovely thought.

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Farah Ilyas 11 May 2013

It wasn't conquest that I sought, just love, not war, this truth survives, my words that pageant throughout time complete surrender best describes. poem bounded with the threads of love, love & love....deep & innovative, great job Sir

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Patricia Grantham 29 March 2013

I really adore this one. A real touching write, it invokes undertones of a very deep love and passion. A great write.

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Unwritten Soul 26 February 2013

Well captain, is it the far thing you worry about, you are a pirate and have a ship..do sail and in every move it makes you come closer to the one who amuse your mind...nice poem captain Ai Ai captain_Soul

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