An All Out War Poem by Marcus McKinley

An All Out War

Rating: 5.0


Pay no attention to the 5/10 (1)
The user rating from the gun
The mediocre false accuser
The one that wrongly judges every user

You see it there just to the right
Negative and full of spite
Blatantly, it dashes hope
On every poem before it’s wrote

So, help me poets one and all
Together let our voice expound
Be gone you evil 5/10 (1)
And, cast your votes to take it down

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i am getting tired of seeing this rating as soon as i post a poem. it is a false validation of a poems merit. i think it should be removed or left at 0/10 (0 votes) until someone actully votes.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noreen Carden 28 January 2014

Yes very funny i give it a ten good point well made in poetic fashion

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Beach Girl 15 January 2014

Well said and kinda funny too!

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