An Account Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

An Account

Rating: 4.2


I am alone, I wait
Under my hairs of heir
For to make a decision
Should I move right or left
Left to the ardor of hope
Right to the weeping hollows
Parallel or vertical in circle
I am caught in a oval plane.

My watch is slow, I see
Around my land and people
I think to move from all
To the edge of death
I wish my time and clock
Be stolen and said
My child it's time up
Come, I am waiting for you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binish Cd 14 December 2011

i think its the poets desire to remain in a state of happiness. A good work.

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Heath Gunn 05 December 2011

This reads as an early work before you really got to grips with your punctuation, it is that which makes your poetry flow in other readings

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grame peele 17 November 2011

a live dramatization before lord. you set a tone which tells clearly the mood.

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Uche Chidozie 12 November 2011

in dilemma, confused, can't decide the decision to take at a point in time, reasoning death as the only solution, this is the exact condition 80% of humans found theirselves.......good work bro.

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lover of poetry sweet 09 November 2011

a poet like should never think to leave. you are pearl of poetry and you should go on.10

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