Amour Poem by Rajkumar Mukherjee

Amour

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AMOUR



it’s not a cryptic language

that creates a barrier

nor a missive in communication

perhaps the wave-length of the mind

fails to comprehend the connotation

of the written words



may be the age that fails

to decipher the feelings of the heart

the shyness that fails to

bring the words into your lips

though the heart guards

a different secret altogether



your eyes depict a rosy picture

of the future though the present

seems to be disillusioned

in the process the invaluable

youth is lost forever…


Rajkumar@Kolkata
05-05-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

the youth is the uouth of the heart and the spirit and this poem filled by fresh youth....touchingly said

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Catrina Heart 05 May 2009

perhaps the wave-length of the mind fails to comprehend the connotation of the written words......... ------ Precisely in terms of love.......women prefer to be more elaborate and frank getting to overtone the words inorder not to mislead on 'assumptions'............Thanks!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 May 2009

your eyes depict a rosy picture of the future though the present seems to be disillusioned in the process the invaluable youth is lost forever…....................Good Write........

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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2009

yes; youth gets lost in the grinds of life...but mind kept as fresh as ever would compensate for the loss...good write, Rajkumar...you tell a sad truth there...and you tell it soft...10

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 12 May 2009

Amour, love, amor, lanmou....this is simply beautiful. Love is 'not a cryptic language', it is a language that is so simple, that it became cryptically complex.

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Anjali Sinha 11 May 2009

age to decipher the feelings of the heart-- I think age is not a barrier for love lovely poem in cryptic language yes cryptic beautiful! ! ! -10 anjali

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Subroto Chatterjee 11 May 2009

Rajkumarda, I found the poem....cryptic! ! ! You want to say a lot, but in a mysterious way. It does invite curiousty...a certain mystique. Keep on.... Cheers. Subroto

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Maitreyee Joshi 07 May 2009

i like this poem very much.in the process of not living with zeal and fervour for number of reasons the youth is lost forever.such lovely expression!

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