Amongst The Red Reeds (A Sonnet.) Poem by J.A McManus

Amongst The Red Reeds (A Sonnet.)

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The striking scarlet standard swings so low
Over the blue, broken bodies of men
The sun becomes cold and loses it’s glow
Across the awful, bloodstained fields and fen
The tiny orphans cry and wail so hard
As do the mournful widows and mothers
Whilst they listen to the yarn of the bard
About their lost fathers, sons and lovers
They hear of their loved ones courageous deeds
Upon the sodden, bloody battle fields
And through the perfidious, muddy reeds
Which are now adorned with their swords and shields
And that is where those men now lay at rest
Amongst the red reeds of the marshland’s crest.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 06 February 2010

A lovely sonnet with a drawn picture of the sun setting over the dead bodies of men for the day to depart and the night to take over, and there is mourning across the land. As usual, day where there is life represents life, and night where there is dark represents death.

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Meggie Gultiano 18 January 2010

a nice sharing. Lovely verses

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J.A McManus

J.A McManus

Carlisle, Cumbria
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