# Amidst..... Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# Amidst.....

Rating: 3.4


sitting amidst thorny bushes
with not a tree or leaf around
where from comes this lovely breeze

standing amidst warring humans
with not a bird or tweeter around
where from comes this lovely song

where from
this lovely breeze
this lovely song
in a poem form

POETRY KEEPING ME IN SANITY
AMIDST ALL OF LIFE'S TRAGEDIES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

poetry makes you focus and strong, tragedies inspire us to write......a leeway or fine fruitful passage to burst and survive...10+++

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~ Jon London ~ 25 September 2009

There's truth to this piece my brother...poetry is saving lives....It saved mine that's for sure....with my faith and understanding......the very thing I failed to realise before I picked up a pen...................wonderful job bro

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Meggie Gultiano 26 September 2009

All i can say is write on..keep on penning amidst all trials you are going to face. Thanks for everything too, for sharing your thoughts with me, my friend.

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Surya . 26 September 2009

really a touching poem voted10 surya

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Beautifully expressed. Poetry can create word pictures where we can expand your thoughts and feelings to find happiness within. 10 love Karin

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Ramin Chaman 07 October 2009

A nice poem...too But I sit amidst a patch of wheat..

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C. P. Sharma 03 October 2009

Sam, You can hear the eternal gong, So, now you sing the divine songs. CP

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Joseph Poewhit 03 October 2009

I'm with you on the sanity part

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Sandra Fowler 01 October 2009

Poetry is a treasure. Your struggle is not in vain for you are an excellent wordsmith. May the music never end.10/10. Warm wishes, Sandra

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 September 2009

the way you thought, it shows you are endowed with wisdom dear friend! 10+

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