America Politico Poem by JOE POEWHIT

America Politico

Rating: 4.5


DEALS, DEALS, DEALS.
Small room, with twelve bathrooms.
Envelopes fill the baskets.
Mirrors with lipstick kisses.
In the small room - elbows bump.
In the office.
OCCUPIED - next bathroom.


Outside neighbors look.
Cesspool trucks arrive.
Dirt cover-up off lid.
Man preys lid open.
Next years news escapes.
CESSPOOL CLEAN and POLITICS AGAIN.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronald Speight 20 October 2008

wow that makes you think its a very interesting poem i hope one day i will be able to write poems like this one that put pictures in your head

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Albert Wong 25 October 2008

Oh, wonderful imagination, you are able to put common into a good picture. Usually, the more common things are not easy to be fixed into a poem. You've successed.+10.

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*Trusting You* 11 November 2008

Mirrors with lipstick kisses. In the small room - elbows bump. interesting lines. you are a very interesting poet. I like this. good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Tsira Goge 15 November 2008

It is an original way to poetry... Live and familiar drawing. 10// Tsira

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Ibrar Siddiqi 19 November 2008

Very good poem - simplified poetry, well written and intellignet. Ibrar

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Maggie Romine 08 December 2009

yeah well you're real deep

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 September 2009

very skillfully penned. good. shan

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2009

Outside neighbors look. Cesspool trucks arrive. Dirt cover-up off lid. Man preys lid open. Next years news escapes. CESSPOOL CLEAN and POLITICS AGAIN..yes it is everywhere adn it happens with arrival of politicians... but city gets clean face...so nice....10 read mine pora pora pora

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Nikunj Sharma 17 August 2009

its definitely a scratch that shall make lot of noise...........pls read my poem called ITS AMERICA YOU FOOL, its a satire with a viewpoint of an outsider

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 15 August 2009

short but meaningful poem!

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