Amazing Horizon Poem by Antonio Liao

Amazing Horizon

Rating: 5.0


placidly
stream flows go
to the sea of hope...... I will
always be waiting of
your
return...wonting
to feel the
inner passion of your Being......awaits and goes
no more
to the fading sun, as the star
in a memories of days, a minute
dawn the darkness side of your way....... always
hold and touch
my wings......
and i say stay with me..... till
i've gone in the
past of the
sun

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 June 2009

Beautiful and deep, as Kesav said. My feelings are same while reading this poem. A ray of hope is always there reflecting from the horizon. A very positive expression, Antonio.................10. Regards Naseer

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2009

'....I will always be waiting of your return...wonting to feel the inner passion of your Being'... Expressions beautiful and deep...good work Anto...thanks...10

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Naidz Ladia 13 June 2009

a piece written in sweet lines..caring, loving..this is it...here's my words for you..not so nice but this is for you.. sun may be selfish to give his light and condemn every rays of its face... stars may fall one by one to the earth and return no more in the breast of the sky.... tears may be as heavy as waves in the shore and never stop falling in the pretty face... but not our friendship dear... a friend is a friend regardless of what... friends never leaves... friendship always grow and grow till the brightness of the day... til a new day of tomorrow... naizz

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an endless one...the sea calling the stream to feel its inner being...very deep thought's there....lovely flow

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Anjali Sinha 12 June 2009

yeh lovely your poem was as amazing as your horizon -10 anjali

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