Treasure Island

Geetha Jayakumar

(Kerala Palakkad)

Am Sorry!


Why are you silent today?
Not happy to see me?
Please say something.
At least shout or just grin.
Talk to me something dear.
I am waiting to hear something from you dear.

He said what about the phone
You didn't pick up at least once
Just check the miss call in your cell
As good as 25.

You made me wait for 3hrs in
This restaurant
Every time waiter came asking me
What do I need?
You know I had 15 glass of water
Each time he came with.
Now my condition is fantastic.

I am sorry dear from my heart
I should not have made you wait so longer.

This itself shows,
How much you cares for me.
Your love for me made you wait for all these hours.

What can be more loveable than this for me....
To realise that I have my beloved who love and cares for me so much.

Time is valuable!
As well as relationship is valuable.
Never test one's patience and
If he is too testing my patience
Like I did now,
What will be the outcome?
We will loose each other forever,
Which I can never imagine.

Never allow any misunderstandings,
To come between you and your beloved.
Mend the relationship in time and keep it alive before its too late!

Am Sorry.....do wonders!

Submitted: Friday, August 09, 2013
Edited: Monday, October 14, 2013

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  • Musafir .. (8/24/2013 11:41:00 AM)

    silence is like u r burning inside with a deep pain, , , we feel helpless when someone left us thinking about how to handle this situation, , , , in most cases we loose our true friends just coz of their silence.. this is a wonderful way to express such a painful feeling.. (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (8/12/2013 11:36:00 AM)

    Hmmm sorrh does wonders...staying silent only creates misunderstandings n builds mountain of sorrow. A gud message thru this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/11/2013 7:31:00 PM)

    Nice nice poem..Time is valuable! .....10
    As well as relationship is valuable.

    time is money
    even told by almighty
    take care of time
    else he may take your care some times...


    one suggestion make little correction.. fifth stanza, , how much you cares, , make it care (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (8/11/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    Somehow I do not see a title connection.
    Somehow berating your love is unappealing
    Connection is love without a crash
    a feeling that needs not be on update or download.
    It is not a game, a yo-yo on a string to be cast off and then reeled back again.
    Watch out! love is a glass of sparkling wine set too clise to the efge of a table.
    If not carefull it will be bumped aside, fall and shatter and all the.joy inside lost. (Report) Reply

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